Cohesion doesn’t have to involve pronouns. You can use synonyms or other substitutionary language without using pronouns. “City” refers to New York, and “dwarf” refers to Tyrion, yes, but no pronouns are involved. Instead, a common noun is referring to a proper noun.
Liblarva is right on the money. A pronoun should refer to the most recently used noun, and when this pattern is not followed, the meaning may be unclear.
In these two sentences, revise them so that it is clear who is doing what:
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The mercenaries were able to neutralize the terrorists by using cloaking devices to infiltrate the terrorists’ base.
However, it’s better not to repeat language in a sentence.
quote:
The notorious terrorist group Barney’s Beefcakes had launched numerous attacks from their covert base. In order to end the threat, a mercenary team was given cloaking devices to infiltrate the hidden base.
Edit: The use of pronouns, synonyms, and other cohesive devices is called anaphora:
https://www.thoughtco.com/what...hora-grammar-1689093
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